I asked one of my classmates for feedback on my magazine cover and contents page. She told me that she thinks it would fit my target audience, and she would buy it for multiple reasons. Hibah, the student I asked, said that the image on the front was very eye catching as it was bright and in focus, and because her angle of gaze was directly at the camera, it made it more appealing and she said it would 'draw her in if she saw it at school/in a shop.' She said that the features in the contents list were also appealing as there was a wide variety of things inside which would make her want to buy it, and also that it related to college well in an original way. I asked her if she thought the colour scheme was good, and she said it was, as the colours used go well together and are coordinated, which makes it look attractive and professional. Hibah also said that the graphics I used made it stand out a lot.
Hibah said that the cover line I chose, 'ART VS. ALGEBRA' was interesting and made her want to find out what it was about, and sparked thoughts into her head about the subjects. She also liked that the model was holding a paintbrush and a calculator in each hand, as she said it was clever how it linked to the cover line well, visualising an actual fight between the two subjects. She said that the font choice of the masthead was also good as it was clear and bold, and because it looked like it was sketched, it related well to my magazine and what it is about. Overall, the feedback I received from Hibah was positive, with her only point being that I could have tried to Photoshop the shadow on the cover out a bit more, and also that I could have made the red circle graphic on the cover 'pop' a bit more, for example adding a drop shadow.
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